Second in the Boulton Quest Series
Revision Process Live Examples
I’m posting live revisions to the second book in the Boulton Quest Series as I’m making them. If you’re interested in the revision process with live examples, including explanations as to why they’re being made, or know someone who is, like the Facebook page to get updates. Feel free to comment on them as well.
Each revision example includes the former text, the new text, and an explanation.
https://www.facebook.com/BoultonQuest
Original Post August 24, 2013